From: vexen	Date: October 21st, 2002 06:02 pm (UTC)		(Link)

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From: (Anonymous)	Date: July 23rd, 2003 06:46 pm (UTC)		(Link)
this poem oh my love please God no

I don't like this poem. It is scarey. I think she killed him or something.

I know though that poetry often comes from pain and that it is a therapeutic process to write the pain down in the form of art, to communicate it. I know this from personal painful expereince. So I am really gald that the peot was able to express this and get it out into the light of day so hopefully things will be better for him or her and less painful. May you never have such pain again. May life look up and be better for you and may you continue to practice your art if you want to.

From: (Anonymous)	Date: August 15th, 2005 02:52 am (UTC)		(Link)
Re: this poem oh my love please God no

i liked this poem, it was great.

	From: alynna_serenity	Date: March 26th, 2004 02:14 am (UTC)		(Link)
	... please god ...

I did a search with the two words ... "please god" ... and I found this place.

If my opinion matters, then I'll tell you that the poem reminds me of my involvement - 5 year relationship - with a man who I thought the world of (he was my life) ... he WAS my life.

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From: (Anonymous)	Date: August 15th, 2005 02:54 am (UTC)		(Link)
Re: ... please god ...

i thought this was a great poem, i RELLY liked it.

From: (Anonymous)	Date: September 18th, 2005 03:27 am (UTC)		(Link)
WOW

I understood that completely... I feel u man.

Heres 1 written by me.
Life to Death


Time after time it passes by
Restless awakening into your eyes

Unheard of voice flush into your mind
Alast you are born and begin to shine

Where there's a begining there is an end
The strands of life are brittle and start to bend

A liquid shadow falls down your spine
Plucking each nerve so, you decline

There are two sides in the end to which you will abide
Choose to be good or in the darkness you will subside

Benjamin Michael Hilbert

Copyright ©2005 Benjamin Michael Hilbert

From: (Anonymous)	Date: February 6th, 2006 02:34 am (UTC)		(Link)
Re: WOW

I loved the poem it was so awsome and i could feel how the auther felt it was sad and emotional. I wish i could write that good So to whom wrote this good-job and please do write more of these poems.