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Sociology, Theology, Anti-Religion and Exploration: Forcing Humanity Forwards

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2006-03-21 09:59 pm (UTC)

"Our ego and our the way we anthropomorphize important concepts means..."

No need for the "our" before "the."

"The mono-theistic believes it seems, are particularly prone to bouts of genocide and war in..."

Should be "believe(r)s, it seems..." right?

"Frequently you will need to address cultural beliefs amongst the religion' followers,"

Religions' or religion's.

Thankyou, I've corrected all the things you pointed out.

The last part of the page is a 2-paragraph quote from my other page on "Cultural Religion Versus Scholarly Religion", which I editted then re-quoted.

Re: Typos


2006-06-25 08:54 pm (UTC)

"...you'll find a Catholic committee was set up to decide what goes in and what doesn't"

That is totally untrue. The bible we have today was already in existance before the Roman Emperor Constantine changed the official Roman religion to Christianity in the 3rd century AD. The Catholic Church didn't come about til well after that.

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