| From: (Anonymous) |
Date:
March 21st, 2006 09:59 pm (UTC)
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Typos
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"Our ego and our the way we anthropomorphize important concepts means..."
No need for the "our" before "the."
"The mono-theistic believes it seems, are particularly prone to bouts of genocide and war in..."
Should be "believe(r)s, it seems..." right?
"Frequently you will need to address cultural beliefs amongst the religion' followers,"
Religions' or religion's.
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